[Report This]Date: October 22 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Whew! Once again, he just barely stays on the tight rope.
Author's Response:
Well, when you've got a circus like this going on, that's all you can hope to do.
[Report This]Date: October 21 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Observation: I've noticed that you use the word "doughy" (wrt the texture of flesh) pretty regularly. Definitely unique. I've never thought of flesh as having a particularly doughy texture. It turns red and white, etc. (there are about a million common metaphors for talking about the way the skin turns color, looks, feels), but the thought of its closing like a 'dent in dough' makes me wonder...
Interesting chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I realize some of my word choices at times can feel like a stretch, but I feel like it's a good sacrifice in order to have variety and to explore some of the difficult-to-picture sensations tiny characters experience, such as being surrounded on all sides by a hand.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
I can continue praising this story forever. god she is a big ol bitch, I think its impossible to like Julia
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Fantastic chapter. I really enjoyed Julia as well as her attitude. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Ps how tall are the little ones? Roughly 3"?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I know somewhere in the story there's an exact height but for the life of me I can't remember. 3" sounds right though.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
I know want to know what that school is doing to these young ladies...
Also another brilliant chapter.