Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner

Wow, I finally finished it!

I guess I loved chapter 36 more than it was worth, because some femdom movies do something similar at real size and it's always been a favorite of mine.

No typo this time, but it seemed to me that explaining the escape plan to the newcomer was a bit rushed (even if, to be honest, maybe it's because I didn't read the story in proper order, and so it really struck me).

 

PS

I don't know how you go on writing stories this long, but if you publish one chapter at a time, don't expect me to comment on each one -- for one, there are enouch comments already XD, and second, the story has been able to constantly surprise me, so commenting without reading some four/five chapter would feel... short-sighted?

 

And btw: do you have any plan for Mommy's TImeout 5? It's been almost a year, you know...

 

Author's Response:

Thanks once again for your responses to this story.  I agree with you on the critique of the escape plan's explanation.  That's partially owed to a pacing issue with the story overall.  The opening two acts of the story are much more indulgent and measured in their pacing, but by the beginning of the 3rd act I realized I needed to streamline the story's speed a bit if I'm going to be able to hold reader interest reliably, especially since this story's been around for a long time.  I hope you do continue to comment on this story once I post more, even if it's only every 5 or so.

I do very much have a plan for Mommy's Time-out 5, and actually have most of it written (let's just keep that between you, me, and anyone else who happens to read this comment).  My goal is to finish Toy Teacher or at least get within a chapter of it being done before I post anything new.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner

Julia must DIE! No, that would be letting her off easy...She should be shrunken, stripped naked, sodimized, disemboweled, and strung up by her own intestine!

Author's Response:

yikes. a very interesting image there!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner

I want to be said for Beth but I kind of view her as a potential martyr if the story plays out how I'm thinking.

Still you wrote one hell of a memorable death scene good sir.

Author's Response:

thanks!