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Reviewer: Orr4eva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life

Been out for a while the these chapters you added lately are great man!



Author's Response:

thank you sir

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life

Charlie has all the sensitivity of a ton of bricks! He might see getting raped by a giantess as one of the better things in _his_ life. But, there's no way Jack (or anybody else in their _right_ mind) would regard what Julia did as qualifying in that category. It was more like skydiving without a parachute! Something most people CAN legimately knock, as dangerously stupid, without first trying it!!

Author's Response:

despite evidence to the contrary on this site, i find it hard to believe that many people legitimately would want to share Jack's fate in this chapter :P

Reviewer: Javert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life

Charlie seems suspiciously cool, but I read him to be one of those "voice of the author" characters.  I enjoy how he tries to calm Jack down by explaining Jack's gone where no man's gone before... er... in those proportions, of course.  The guy's got a good head on his shoulders.  



Author's Response:

haha charlie is indeed the kind of character I don't have to think much about when writing his dialogue. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life

Charlie makes an interesting point, you have to take some joy in the small stuff or you'll go batshit insane.

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