Date: August 11 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life
Been out for a while the these chapters you added lately are great man!
Author's Response:
thank you sir
Date: August 09 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life
Charlie has all the sensitivity of a ton of bricks! He might see getting raped by a giantess as one of the better things in _his_ life. But, there's no way Jack (or anybody else in their _right_ mind) would regard what Julia did as qualifying in that category. It was more like skydiving without a parachute! Something most people CAN legimately knock, as dangerously stupid, without first trying it!!
Author's Response:
despite evidence to the contrary on this site, i find it hard to believe that many people legitimately would want to share Jack's fate in this chapter :P
Date: August 09 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life
Charlie seems suspiciously cool, but I read him to be one of those "voice of the author" characters. I enjoy how he tries to calm Jack down by explaining Jack's gone where no man's gone before... er... in those proportions, of course. The guy's got a good head on his shoulders.
Author's Response:
haha charlie is indeed the kind of character I don't have to think much about when writing his dialogue. thanks for the review!
Date: August 08 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life
Charlie makes an interesting point, you have to take some joy in the small stuff or you'll go batshit insane.