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Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to GTS World!  I'm glad to see that you are on here and writing stories, Beallis.  And I see you've flooded the market on your first day it.  I'm hoping to read and comment on all three of your stories.

This one was quite the little gem.  As you know I'm a pretty avid sports fan, so I may have pulled a "Bret" once or twice in my life.  Lucky for me I didn't end up getting eaten by my girlfriend and triggering a wave of vore and violence!

Good twist at the end, too.  Good read all around! 

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