Date: November 13 2011 8:37 PM Title: August 25, 2011 - Part Two
As is usually the case, your description of Ryan's plight is purely awesome. I enjoyed the way that he identified with his non-human companions inside Noelle's mouth. Very well-played.
Perhaps since Ryan's escape and subsequent sentencing to "bra duty" came at the very end of this chapter, the next chapter can be a sensual description of his predicament there.
Author's Response:
I figure that in near-death situations, you do whatever you have to do to survive. Identifying them as being in a similar situation, but helpless, empowers the character so that he feels like he could possibly survive this, because he is NOT helpless, like they are. Plus, I just like the idea of lots of living, or non-living things being swallowed at the same time. I dunno, maybe it's weird kink. *shrug* Thanks for your review, as always!