[Report This]Date: December 26 2019 8:52 AM Title: July 14, 2011
One of the best stories I have ever read. It was simply... magnificent.
Date: November 01 2012 8:29 AM Title: July 14, 2011
Awesome style. Keep up your good work!
Date: November 14 2011 3:16 PM Title: July 14, 2011
glad to help; my personal fav foodplay (i guess this is a word now, isn't it?) of yours was the ice cream scene from family bondings, so i daresay there wasn't a whole lot of adjustment called for on your part. i actually did write a semi-lengthy voyeur/unaware story a while back, but have never posted it. i might at some point, though
[Report This]Date: November 13 2011 9:02 PM Title: July 14, 2011
I forgot to put a rating on my last review. I know you like your stars!
Author's Response:
Yep, I do! Lol.
[Report This]Date: November 02 2011 11:34 PM Title: July 14, 2011
Forgot the rating...heh
[Report This]Date: November 02 2011 11:09 AM Title: July 14, 2011
This Story was pure brilliance! It captures the life of a shrunken man who doesnt know his place in life as his beautiful owners property. he loves her but isnt sure of the relationship between them and is really confused. I loved it because I myself would love to be in his position and would find it hard to find my place as a giant girls plaything, wanting to be her slave, but also treated like a real human being and loved sometimes. Keep up the excellent work and I hope to see more work from you like this in either a sequel or a new story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've really trying to create a realistic perspective on this whole idea. I've followed you for a while now, as well (I assume you are also the Mr.E on writing.com), and always enjoy reading your work, so hearing confirmation of a job well done from you is inspiring. Thanks again, and I'll do my best to keep it up.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 11:31 PM Title: July 14, 2011
I forgot to add a rating with my last post.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 6:04 PM Title: July 14, 2011
good work, i was glad to be greeted with a quality story on the most recent list after my extended absence around the site. i enjoy reading how you play with sentence types, lengths, and phrasings. it's a little english-geeky of me, probably, to enjoy those things, but the variety really does benefit the story. keep it up.
Author's Response:
Hearing those kinds of words in a forum like this is certainly out of the ordinary, but I dunno if I would call you a geek, lol. But thank you anyway, hearing from you is always great. I wish I could say that there was some formula that I use, but I honestly just write the same way that I think, which means I probably don't make much sense when I speak, haha. Can't wait to see you writing more often again.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 12:18 PM Title: July 14, 2011
As is usually the case with your stories, this is very sensual and appealing to read. I have enjoyed it tremendously. I look forward to future chapters and finding out where this will go.
Please continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've been gone lately, but I'm back, hopefully. I've seen that you've been writing a lot, and hope to get to read some of it and tell you what I think. Thanks for your review!