Reviews For The Prayerful Lady
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Reviewer: Thinker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2012 12:23 PM Title: The Prayerful Lady

Very nice and very well written.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2011 4:34 PM Title: The Prayerful Lady

I'm surprised that you don't like this story.  It's very methodical, descriptive and sensual.  I enjoyed it.  As I said about the "Christmas Party" story, I appreciate that you write normal and even bigger women into your stories.  Not enough writers do.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I think I was dissatisfied with this story because it was just a moment in time that I built upon. Maybe that's all it has to be, just a study of a special woman.

I didn't realize there was an issue with the full range of body sizes. Maybe other people are thinking about supermodels in their stories? I want as much realism as I can introduce in my work, hopefully to enable a reader to better relate to the characters in it. I'll definitely start leaning on "plus sized" women (and men) as a counterstrike to the more narrowly defined margins of acceptable body types.

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