Reviewer: Devoool Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 3:40 AM Title: The culprit is revealed!

ok, first, good story, seriously i liked it, im not native english and im not a good writer even in my own language, but i'll tell you my feelings,

to be honest, the story felt boring at the beginning, im not sure way, but it gave me this feeling, however, on the last chapter, the story sucked me in! and i was disappointed to see there was no new more chapters XD

I think its because of the change in events!

anyway, if you haven't planned what to write in the next chapters, I personally love to see " Nami, Boa, Vivi and Kaya doing Butt play, Anal insertion, Vagina insertion and S&M, to shrunken people"

good luck with the story, and keep it up, XD one piece is my FAV show!! so please do'nt give up on writing XDD

 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! I can see what you mean about the first few chapters. To be honest I'm disappointed in them myself. I plan to rewrite them when I finish the story. I have some idea where the story is going at the moment but it's not written in stone. As for the butt insertion and everything you mentioned, I'm not sure if I should do that because I think it would be too out of character for them. However, I might consider them doing it to other shrunken men, not Luffy. I'm also thinking of having the rest of the strawhat boys shrink. Thoughts?