[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
Ok, first of all, what Stella did was ridiculous. I mean she 'stamped him hard enough to rattle the living room furniture'?? What?? a) How could that NOT kill him...it RATTLED furniture. b) How does a girl decide to become a murderer at the age of 13??
Clearly, this allows us to put checkboxes in the standard giantess foot-related tropes, but it strikes me as unrealistic.
That being said, I'm a gentle giantess fan and the relationship between Lisa and Peter has me hooked. :) I find myself looking forward to the next chapter as I read further. Plus, I really like Peter's sisters. Each has a different way of showing love for him.
In spite of the existance of impossibly-evil girls in this story (seriously, do people like Mandy and Stella exist in real life), I have to say it's becoming one of my favorites on this site. I just wish the conflict were a bit more subtle in some areas.
Overall, incredible story so far. Please keep writing! I look forward to the next chapters.
Well, the thing to realize about Stella is that she wasn't making an attempt to gravely hurt him. Depending on how her foot landed on the floor, she could've rattled the furniture and still kept Peter from the major impact - like if she led with her heel, for example. Glad you're liking the story.
Author's Response:
Date: November 07 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
Greatly looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
Thank you for putting so much time in this story and all your other stories. The development of your characters is interesting. You describe everything in good rich detail.
Author's Response:
Sure. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: November 01 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
Big opportunity for both Peter and Lisa to mature a bit. Perhaps if Lisa sees how bad Suzanne (and Jessica) can get in the over-protectiveness mode, she'll realize how she can give Peter the space to feel confident. Deciding not to hide his misadventures from Lisa was also a learning moment for Peter. Not every friendly giantess has to be a surrogate Suzanne.
Still wondering about Peter's dad.
Author's Response:
You're right that Peter might've once hidden this from Lisa, but he's grown (ha) in his short time at school. Peter's dad will indeed be addressed at a later point in the story.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
I don't what's going to be scarier for Pete. A family night with Lisa as guest of honor? Or an alliance of convenience between all five of his...well, maybe "enemies" is too strong a term. But, definitely hostile acquaintances!