[Report This]Date: September 24 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
I hear you, Max. But, remember the old warning about wishes: "You might get it!"
It's already a no-brainer that Peter certainly will. ;-)
Author's Response:
He most definitely will.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
You know, sometimes it seems like I feel worse for the your sister characters than your actual protagonists (except Carly, of course). Always losing their friends because they turned out to be brother-tormenting lunatics.
Neat chapter as always.
Author's Response:
That's generous of you. Most of my sister characters have pretty spotty track records. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: September 21 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
Some of us don't WANT him to suffer! It's more like we've cynically _resigned_ ourselves to seeing him suffer through the same old tropes. Not expecting certain authors to be refreshingly inventive...and, thereby, getting pleasantly surprised when they are!
Author's Response:
I'd like to think Peter's adventures can surprise from time to time.
Date: September 20 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
Going by the reviews... man some of you people really want to see this poor kid suffer.
Author's Response:
I guess they do!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
*sigh* someone is always rescuing Peter, lol. My favorite 2 chapters so far. Now if we could only get Peter into the hands of Mandy and Stella by themselves, phew, that would be a party! Probably not a very fun party for Peter though.
Author's Response:
Yikes, both Mandy and Stella? Seems vindictive. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2015 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
I hope we can get back to the drama that was broken by these chapters. I'm sorry, Jacksmith, I usually think your works are great, but these last couple chapters didn't mesh well with the rest. Had this story taken place mostly in the school, with the home pieces being mainly plot oriented. I just got invested into Peter and Lisa and Sharon so much that this just doesn't feel... right. Then again, I hate kids, so maybe it's just me.
Author's Response:
Hmm. Well, it does need to be noted that this is a story with a lot of branching narrative threads - it's not just about Peter/Lisa/Sharon, and I like to give equal attention to all these aspects of the character's life.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
Stella needs her own tinies, good stuff.
Author's Response:
Too bad for her that Peter's the only one in this world.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2015 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
Well, it looks like there _was_ a second blue moon in a row (lol)!
Seriously, though: Stella will deserve it if Jessie goes "Superfly Snuka" on her. Because Peter was right. In legitimate childhood games, a double-dare is NOT punishment for failing a previously accepted dare. It's an attempt to provide further incentive for someone reluctant to accept such a dare on the first try.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, Peter wasn't really in a position to stop her from distorting the rules of childhood games.
Date: September 20 2015 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
Ok ... even i am happy to see Peter rescued I didn't get how. Stella lifted her foot to see Peter trapped & mocked him. Peter called Jessica and Stella lowered her foot & touched ground. Then Jessica screamed and pushed Stella to save Peter???
Author's Response:
Yeah it sounds like you understood it.
Date: September 20 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare
Woah, any more and he would have been stepped on! Who knows if that would have killed him but it certainly could have broken something! Is Suzanne gonna find out? Im eager to see her go momma bear on Stella but I realize that would probably be bad for her. Honestly this is worse than anything thats happenef to him at school so far, even Sharon is starting to look like a saint in comparison!
Author's Response:
Jessica's definitely making enough noise at this point that Suzanne's going to find out. And yeah, Stella makes a few of Peter's school mates look nicer.