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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2007 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 5: Power Play

OK, this story is interesting.
Progress is slow with short irregular chapters.
BTW, where's the "vore, butt, humilation, toilet" stuff that is mentioned as the categories for this story?

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2006 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - On the Ground

Three chapters and no "Butt, Toilet, Vore, Humiliation" so far. This sure is a slow-developing story. We need more action, peter!

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Date: September 04 2006 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 - On the Ground

This looks like it could get interesting. Why are the chapters so short though?

Author's Response: Suspense maybe?

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