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Reviewer: psos138 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape

Excellent story! I keep reading with the hope that Jack can finally grow back to normal size and get some justice on Carly. Do hope that is something we can see in the future.

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape

I wanna read more of this story =[

Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape

You've got me eating out of your hand here.  You write amazingly well.  This story is really incredible!

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape

This was a very exciting chapter. I'm glad to read in one of your responses that the story is only about half done. I really think this is the best series on this website. I will be a little sad when it ends.

I really think you have a great charachter In Carly. There are times I find my self hating her. But then other chapters have me liking her. I do feel bad for Jack most of the time though.

Dave

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape

Uh oh.  A new twist in this epic adventure! 

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