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Date: February 03 2019 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

This is still one of my favorite series and i look forward to seeing what Carly's punishment will be some day.  I'm really glad Jack got a happy ending after everything he went through.  His parents must feel really guilty and wishing they found out sooner. 

Author's Response:

Thanks! I really do plan to address what happened with everybody in this story someday.

Reviewer: jonny8107 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Best seris on this sight. And you have to create a sequel to what happens to Carly, and Jacks relationship with Sophie.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  There will be a sequel some day.

Reviewer: Intention Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

It's been fun reading through this series. The first two were great starters, showing how Carly and Jack grew their relationship of hate and malice toward each other. The trials Jack was put through were very nice and helped further explain Carly's feelings toward her 'big' brother. It was then nice to see how she developed 5 years later, and how Jack developed too over those long years of entrapment. While the ending was not the one i would have chose, it was still a satisfying ending to such a great series. But apparently your making a spin off, so i'll keep my eye out for that.

Author's Response:

thanks for the rating/review; it's always fun to hear new thoughts since this was finished quite a while ago.  i'm glad you liked the progression of the characters.  it is still the end of the main series, in that it's the last one that's going to follow the "Carly plays with Jack" format of the others, but there will indeed be a 5th one that shows new kinds of challenges arising after the 3rd story

Reviewer: Silhouette Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

There are a few things about this I didn't like.

Somethimes the description can be a bit too detailed, It was dragging on a bit. (I had to skip quite a few paragraphs in quite a few chapters)

I think five years was a bit too big a gap, I think anyone would'vr given up long before that.

I would've loved a bit of insertion (not including Sophie, that wasn't described enough for me) , especially by Jenny and especially in her ass.

 

All in all though, this was a top class story and I'd love to see more of it.

Author's Response:

glad you liked it. in response to the critiques:

I get what you mean about the description, that just happens to be one of my favorite parts of stories, so I use a lot of it.

He did kind of give up; it wasn't until about midway through the story where he decides to fight back again, but regardless I just wanted Carly to be an adult so readers were less uncomfortable.

I'm not really a big fan of insertion and don't think I could write it very well, so that's why there was just sort of a hint of it in there.

Reviewer: Arbiter617 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Awesome!!!!!!!! Please put more with his cousinse and what happened to Carly.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Great story from start to finish, but I am curious what became of carly.  I kept thinking something would be mentioned of her. 

Author's Response:

you'll hear something of carly in the spin-off story

Reviewer: underherheels Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

What happene to carly?

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Very good ending. Would like to have seen a happy ending for carly, i would love to see an alternative ending in which sophie never entered the room.

Author's Response:

Honestly, if you really want an "alternate ending" where Carly gets a happy conclusion, you could sort of just pretend like the story ended at Chapter 29 :P thanks for the comment!