Date: February 11 2021 12:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I loved the tension, the uneasiness. Then how he took the high ground. While the dark side of me was hoping for a more brutal end. I am very satisfied with the results. You did well, can't wait to see what you do next
Date: February 27 2019 2:45 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
2 good
Date: August 04 2014 8:57 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Man, awesome, detailed and immersive work. Very, very good! Your grammar are pretty rich, which make the story even more immersive. The characters are good developed, and you keep the story long, but not tiring. I really liked the feet scenes in particular. Once again, very, very good.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: April 03 2012 6:45 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Your stories are definitely the best it has to offer in years. Hope you'll continue with the Big Sister Diaries, and do write that spin-off or a sequel. where we see tiny Carly's life. But I do also hope you'll continue the story shifting to Jack and Sophie's relationship, that's something I want to see explored as well.
Author's Response:
thanks, i'm glad you've enjoyed the stories. the spin-off will indeed cover both of these aspects: carly's fate, and jack's further experiences with his cousins
[Report This]Date: April 02 2012 12:07 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Great story. I am one of those who read every word of the series. It was a fantastic story. Yes I would like a story where we find out what happens to Carly. The story was full of twist and turns. I loved it. I am glad that Jack is ok. But I do admit that part of me wishes Carly won. Just imagine what she would do to him if he was a willing participant. Towards the end he loved her. She could make him do things to prove his love. Oh well thanks for a great story and series.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks for your consistent reviews on the series, they are appreciated. i'm glad you liked the conclusion. i get what you mean about the alternative ending, i wrestled with how to end it a bit, which is sort of silly to me since it is a fetish story we're talking about, but whatever, it was fun and i liked writing it. i look forward to hearing your thoughts in the future.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2012 1:34 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
I have never felt sick reading a macro story like I did during chapter 31. In a good way, of course - I've literally not once cared about the fate of a tiny person until I read your story. Masterfully written. I can't wait to read more of ALB4, and if you're interested at all in my opinion, I'd greatly enjoy reading a continuation of Carly's story. You do degredation the best of any macrophile out there today. So pat yourself on the back, this saga was worth it.
Author's Response:
thank you; i'm glad that i got you to care about the characters, that's one of the most important aspects of any type of story to me. ALB4 will periodically have updates, and you will hear a bit more about carly after the conclusion of this story in the spin-off story
Date: April 01 2012 12:23 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Very nice and I would love to read more especially about what became of Carly. Bravo good sir, bravo.
P.S. If you are doing more epilouges I still will push for at-least a peek back in Alison and Ash.
Author's Response:
someday, i will indeed do a check-up on the Family Reunion characters, although it probably won't be for a while. thanks for reading!
Date: March 31 2012 7:16 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Brilliant story Jack. What happened to Carly though? Not like she can be sent off to prison. Maybe the nut house? Actually, that might not be a bad story idea! Think about how much trouble shed be in, stuck with a bunch of other looneys! However, I like Carly too much to witness her going through that torture, she might be my favorite character ever, damn I wanted her to win! lol. You definitely surprised me with this ending, your stories consists of mischievous cruel giantesses, I wasn't expecting a gentle ending. Definitely a testament to your writing abilities to make me give a damn about how it all played out. So many of these stories are read just for the juicy parts but you made people actually interested in the story itself. Well done.
Author's Response:
thank you; i couldn't ask for higher praise than to hear that you actually cared about the outcome of what is, in essence, a fetishistic porn story. really, i think it's just a lot of fun, and i'm glad you enjoyed it. you will probably hear about carly's ultimate fate in the spin-off story
Date: March 31 2012 6:21 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Very nice and peaceful end. I've stopped reading them for fetish quite some time ago, I'm not that huge feet guy. But in the last months you did a great job keeping me interested simply in the further development of the story. I like it that you granted Jack some kind of "final rest" in the end.
I'd have liked to get some information on how the story went on for Carly though. Is she dead? I thought he just punched her unconscious..
I liked to read the Big Sister Diaries, it was cool to see some kind of contrast between how Carly feels about the whole situation, and what she actually tells Jack how she feels.
Lastly, I say that I'm totally in favor of your spin-off idea. Thanks for everything so far, and good luck :)
Author's Response:
he did indeed just punch carly unconscious; i'll probably end up addressing what happened to her more specifically in the eventual spin-off story. thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 31 2012 5:52 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Wow, I'm stunned you were manage to cap this with a happy ending. :) I would have never though with how absolute Carly's control was. I admire your control as a writer! :)
Hope to see more from you. I especially love your SW scenes. Keep writing!
Author's Response:
thanks. i always enjoy the fun spin that SW put on things, so i'll definitely try one again sometime