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Reviewer: ceezy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

Surely carly didnt stay quite about what sophia did to her... so how did the authorities handle that situation? 



Author's Response:

Carly might actually not have said anything. She understood how deep of a grave she'd dug for herself after she was caught.

Reviewer: The Darkness Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

Beutiful justice!

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

You're an amazing writer. This was the best story I have read on this site. :)

 



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

A fitting end, if you'll pardon the pun.

Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

Your writing is so dark.  Have you read much Conrad?  

I have much enjoyed Jack's mental journey along with his physical journey.  It's so complex, you pathologize these characters, it's wonderful.

I'm really hoping you decide to take a stab at what Jack's freedom could be, after being Carly's drawer creature for five years.

 



Author's Response:

depending on the kinds of reviews/emails I get, I may revisit Jack in a follow-up story sometime in the future

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

...

 

Wow, well I'm not surprised how Sophie acted Jack pulled a bit of a 360 towards the end there.

Regardless of what happens I am glad the world got to see Carly in all her glory as she was without a doubt one of the best writen characters I've ever read.

Hats off to you god sir and keep up the good work on your other tales.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

Maybe you can end by having Carly be Chloe's pet or something, anyway I really hope you'll continue the story at some point in the near future. Everyone loves this series.



Author's Response:

it does seem like that would be justified, doesn't it? :P  we'll just have to wait and see in the epilogue

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

This series is fucking amazing, man.  Well done and I cant believe its over!  This whole story and series that we've been reading over the past year has been extremely well put together. 

Personally, this ALB series if combined into one long story, easily ranks among my top 5 all time favorite stories, which is coming up on almost 10 years that I've been into this fantasy.  The way that you've written this story puts you right up there alongside the best, in my book.  From how you incorporate character thoughts, to the way you build the intensity of the plot, its just amazing.  I've only seen a few other writers who have written stories as well as what you have, ever.  So please, do everyone a favor and keep writing, whether you do it professionally or just on the side, dont waste the skills you have.



Author's Response:

wow, very high praise; thank you so much. i hope you continue to enjoy reading what i upload

Reviewer: Javert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

Brilliant, as usual.



Author's Response:

thank you sir

Reviewer: horatio Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

Absolutely great. Thanks for keeping it up such a long time, can't wait to read the epilogue :)



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. the epilogue will appear soon

Reviewer: jojomojo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

besst auther in the world I hope you make more stories

Author's Response:

i shall indeed make more stories

Reviewer: Mars Frog Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

*claps* Excellent! Muy excellente! An excellent ending that had a little bit of everything, wonderfully detailed. :)

I think my favorite part out of all of this though, was Jack's final confrontation with his fallen sister. He didn't let himself become a merciless brute, he wanted to be better than his sister, and he won that battle. Of course, she definitely had that punch coming. ;)

Can't wait to see this epilogue~

 



Author's Response:

it means a lot that you enjoyed that final confrontation, it was important to me to tie off their destructive relationship in a fitting way. thanks for reading and reviewing!

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