[Report This]Date: November 23 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
God, what a well written chapter. Absolutely brilliant. I love the psychology! Could it be ,, and they lived happily ever after?
Date: February 29 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
Is that the end? I hope not 'cause I was rooting for the little guy. Hopefully, if he's enough of a computer wiz to put that program together and start a countdown, he was smart enough to put a secondary password in that would make it look like the program was eliminated, but really only set the countdown back a ways and hides it from Carly. If you want to use that idea to continue this to a happier ending then be my guest.
[Report This]Date: February 29 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
For me this path (if Carly isn't faking again, which is unlikely from the way she acted) is being much better than he gaining freedom and probably being subject of serious and not pleasuring research about his growing through many many years... which definitely wouldn't be the scientists goal, they would certainly be more interested in many other things about this new found shrinking man and its applications rather than his own well being. :P
If Jack and Carly try to be honest with their feelings, and mainly Jack accept this life which he seen to have now, I believe they can be happy indeed. Like I said they make a good/cute masochist couple. Even more now that they had confessed their love for each other. Jack enjoy this life, there is no deny in this anymore... and Carly too, she is crazy for him, and crazy enough to dangerously believe that she need and have the right to punish him anytime she believe he isn't understanding her or anything else. But at same time had accepted that he is the most important tiny person in her life now, her drug, he will be in good hands in her care, she really wants to take care of him forever. And Jack when facing death at her mouth, realized that he need her as much as she need him. She wants to feel loved by him and he wants to feel safe only with her. Even when Carly was being evil with him, when she handed him to Jenny he felt so incredibly helpless and scared being in another hand other than his sister, his body and mind were being honest already, he really need to feel his sister touch to feel good and safe. Thinking now as another reader said, maybe if Sophie 'rescue' him now, it will be really painful for him. I'm curious about how they will handle Sophie now that they accepted each other.
Date: February 29 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
Love the story! Would like to see more of both cousins. Maybe Carly can have them both over for some fun.
Date: February 28 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
Outstanding!
I didn't think Jack would give it to her..I mean I probably would've, but I didn't think he would. I've seen too many fake tears to belive her though.
I enjoyed Jack's determination throughout to bury Carly the tyrant and his unwillingness. This changes things but if you say the cousin is coming back, a separation from Carly may become his new torture.
Date: February 28 2012 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
Gosh, all this were exactly what I was thinking and believing! :) The 'addiction' for this new life for both of them, the denial, the struggle, the mixed twisted feelings of love and hate, all resulting in this. Those five years have certainly been mentally disturbing for both of them, if Jack is completely broken by now, Carly isn't much different. I think it was the first time they were honest with each other feelings without caring about anything more, just the two of them, maybe not trying to blame all this to the quarrels and hate on the past and focus on what they mean now to each other in present. Still, even if things will be different from now on for little Jack as big sissy promised to be good to him (though, I doubt that she will stop some punishments, a toy always need that)... Jack maybe threw away their last hope of returning to normal, some drugs are very difficult to throw away indeed. And now after all this, their 'need' for each other certainly will grow even stronger. :P Loved it!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
After this chapter, I went from wanting him to be saved, to wanting him to suffer for life. He doesn't deserve to be saved, and he is literally a dumbass.
However, I may be wrong, maybe she actually changed and will make him orgasm more often(Which would actually be an understanding motive for giving her the password). But, I highly doubt this, and she will probably torture him for life.
You always leave the best cliffhangers though!! Can't wait to see what happens to him. :)
[Report This]Date: February 27 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
If he now admits his longing for this there should be no trouble, unless of course, we are subject to another of your oh so brilliant plot twists :D
[Report This]Date: February 27 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
Great chapter, as always. My money's on Sophie ending up shrunk and Carly gives her over to Jenny. That way everyone's happy.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
holy shit! i completely thought that the last chapter was the end of the story and jack's life. i never would have guessed that he would willingly sign his life over to carly forever. now, i wonder what sophie is going to do?
well done man! never expected carly to bring him back.
Date: February 27 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
Fantastic! Took 5 long years to break him but she finally did it. Carly is one of my favorite characters ever. Sophie better not screw this up! I think Carly is too smart and will be ready for Sophie, plus now Jack wants to stay with Carly, so that adds an interesting twist to any attempted rescue. Going to be very sorry to see this one end.
Date: February 27 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
Jack is plum damn goofy but lucky for us he has such an excellent writer and fun as hell big sis to keep us coming back for more.
Also this begs the question...if one tiny can do all that granted he had more time then how did the entire group fail with Julia.
Honestly as a one off sometime down the road we need Julia, Carly, Alison and all their -pets- to have sit down interview. A Writers Guild of Crazy Giant Girls if you will.
Keep on doing what you're doing.