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Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly

Finally Jack make a play..and it works.  Well done Jack :)  Only thing is you gave her two days.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly

You sir bait and switch more than Vince Russo...it doesn't mean I don't love reading the hell out of this for as long as it goes.

 

 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly

well now, i wonder what Jenny has in store, perhaps unknowingly?, for little Jack.  this might be a long two days for him. 

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly

Oh man. After reading this chapter and seeing Jenny in the mix, i have a feeling i know whats gonna happen and Jack is gonna be in for a big surprise. :O

Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly

Keep up Jack!! You can do it, just two days! :D Can't be worse than five years, isn't? Or could it be...? oh boy... :(

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