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Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 14: Carly 2.0

your cliffhangers are what keep me reading.  you always choose to end the chapter at just the right moment.  Great chapter btw.  You do an awesome job of keeping the suspence all throughout the chapter as well.

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