Reviewer: Moti0n Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 9:12 AM Title: Removed

Epic.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 9:10 AM Title: Removed

Amazing! XD

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 4:02 PM Title: Removed

Moral of the chapter:

In the event of capture by a Brazilian giantess, all rude, self-righteous authoritarian stewardesses are advised to put their heads between their knees...and kiss their shrunken asses good-bye.

Reviewer: Casanova Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2013 7:09 AM Title: Removed

Like your other story, the premise that you have here is both innovative and compelling. On the one hand, we have a protagonist that can really handle himself, a strong, witty fellow who presumably won't just roll over to a giantess's whims. Naturally, readers are excited to see how the inevitable "final battle" between Thornton and whichever girl develops into the main villain turns out. This is a breath of fresh air when compared to the typical dominant/submissive dynamic that comprises 99% of the stories here. (The only exception that comes immediately to mind is openhighhat's excellent story, Titan: Physics.) Beyond that, I must further compliment you on your characters. They definitely draw the reader into the story, particularly Thornton!

However, I do have a bit of criticism for that same aspect of your story. While your characters are quite interesting and diverse, they seem inappropriate for the setting: Harvard. While I never attended Harvard, my close friend happened to go there, and I've visited him on a number of occasions. Those experiences, and also a sort of peripheral understanding, have led me to believe that most showboating of any kind is shunned at that school, and at most other elite schools. It's viewed as tacky. Maybe my perspective is unique, and other readers wouldn't have objections. However, I do believe that it's important to write from a position of authority. As in, it's important to know your setting/background backwards and forwards, or, failing that, it's important to gloss over the parts that you don't know. I just feel like your characters, while they are undoubtedly compelling, probably wouldn't exist at Harvard. For instance, I guarantee you no one would care that Ashley was the head cheerleader. On the other hand, it's inevitable that whatever you write about will offend some "expert" somewhere, so I guess you'll have to try to strike a healthy balance. Let me just reiterate that in general it's good to write settings that you know intimately if they also happen to exist in real life; that way you won't alienate anyone and also might win a few extra fans.

If I could offer up an alternative to your setting, perhaps some sort of reality TV situation would be more appropriate. You could still have Thornton and Stephen be from Harvard, but the other characters could be farflung recruits auditioning for the trip of a lifetime. And perhaps the science geeks could be someone Thornton offended back at the university and are seeking revenge of some kind. That way the entertaining cattiness, etc. won't feel out of place. Just a thought.

Ultimately, this setting situation isn't a big problem. Characters are the most important part of any story, and you've got that covered in spades. Overall, this is a fantastic story that could use a few tweaks in the story, which I'm enjoying very much. I hope to see more of this story as well!

P.S. While the lack of macrophilia content doesn't bother me at all, I imagine that some of your other readers are itching to get to the good stuff (especially since your descriptions are so great). If you can somehow gracefully work that into the story sooner and more often, I'm sure you'll get a response from the readers. Balancing porn and story definitely isn't easy to do, but something tells me you've got the right stuff.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 1:20 PM Title: Removed

Awesome :D, buttcrush FTW

Reviewer: Neurotic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 11:00 PM Title: Removed

I don't mind a story trying to take sufficient time in order to build up shrinking segments as long as the development is interesting. The dialogue and descriptions are all spot on. 

My only real complaint or suggestion I hope the gts interaction is more engaging when a more prominent character shrinks. For example if Alisha were to get her hands on a shrunken Thorton I hope there is more substance than her just wanting to make him a sex slave. I'd love to see more of the humiliation factor touched on, which can be acheived through means other than just shoving a captive in a vagina, inbetween breasts, etc.

Overall though the characters are very interesting and all have interesting motives/personalities that I hope carry on or change depending on who shrinks who or whatever route you decide to go.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Neurotic.

I'm aware that this story might not be the pacing or the style that you're used to, but thank you for the points you raised.

Only thing that I'll say is that the giantess that you've seen so far, Alisha, is more suited to barbaric forms of humiliation and selfish sexual needs. I contribute that to her upbringing and how she feels society treats her. She has cravings of what she'd like to do to a tiny Thornton, and she's simply venting those needs on a figure of authority to make herself feel superior? Who knows.

My point is, that other giantesses in the story will have different motivations when encountering tiny people. A girl with low self esteem, will likely want to make someone worship her. Potentially her tiny will be a proud and popular individual that she will want to break piece by piece, without anyone being any the wiser.

Thornton.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 12:08 PM Title: Removed

Nice alternate viewpoint from the previous chapter. It sufficiently compensates for the way-overdue posting of this one! And, yes, I'm still in favor of you continuing this story. If only so we can see what happens to everyone else once they hit Europe. Which, if memory serves, was the initial premise of the story, as a whole, anyway!

Author's Response:

Thank you Carycomic, it's been a while since I posted. Hopefully I'll continue with this one.

I just got very annoyed with how long it was taking to progress with the plot lines.

Reviewer: calvinsans Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 10:21 AM Title: Removed

the build up is great, the characters are great. i can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response:

I need to figure out where it goes too. :)

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 11:20 PM Title: Removed

I just read the entire story thats up so far and I love it. I hope they get more evil and that thorton ends up where he belongs as does Ashley and her bitch gang.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 12:39 PM Title: Removed

Oooooooh! Intrigue worthy of a James Bond film (pre-Daniel Craig, of course).

Me, likey! :-)