[Report This]Date: July 22 2019 5:48 PM Title: 8 Days Ago
please sir...more?
Date: January 03 2018 11:52 AM Title: 4 Days Ago
So when do you continue?
Date: January 03 2018 11:52 AM Title: 4 Days Ago
So when do you continue?
[Report This]Date: June 22 2015 2:30 PM Title: 4 Days Ago
Hay, hope you plan to finish this someday, great story!!!!
hate to see it end here...
Date: November 30 2011 10:35 AM Title: 4 Days Ago
Btw: you mentioned back, in chapter 1, that Crystal is Mel's sister-in-law. Was that a slight misprint? Or, is she truly married to an as-yet-unmentioned brother of Vincent's wife?
Author's Response:
that was indefinitly a typo, I guess I couldn't decide between "her sister" or "my sister-in-law" so my fingers (working faster than my brain) combined the two, Crystal is 100% only related Vince through marrage
[Report This]Date: November 28 2011 1:43 PM Title: 4 Days Ago
So, I take it this means she _won't_ be setting up a new appointment for him?
[Report This]Date: November 28 2011 1:39 PM Title: 5 Days ago
Poor mini-Vinnie.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2011 2:43 PM Title: 8 Days Ago
Awesome slow-shrink story! Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: September 22 2011 8:39 AM Title: 6 Days Ago
Yes, sir! That top-secret Federal lab is looking better and better, by comparison to Crystal, all the time.
;-)
[Report This]Date: August 11 2011 8:17 AM Title: 7 days ago
Just having had this initial glimpse of Crystal's personality, I think Our Hero might be better off being poked and prodded in a top-secret Federal lab, by comparison. Lol!
Date: August 09 2011 5:08 AM Title: 7 days ago
THANK YOU
PLEASE MAKE THE STORY LONG AT "KID HEIGHT"
[Report This]Date: July 30 2011 1:47 PM Title: 8 Days Ago
Not a bad opener! But, there a few things I feel compelled to point out:
1) I think you meant "100%" rather than one thousand and five.
2) Were you referring to the Rainbow Serpent of Australian Aboriginal mythology, or the rainbow boa (E. cenchria) of Latin America?
3) I've never particularly liked the metric system. Which, I guess, makes me a "foot" fetishist! ;-D
Author's Response:
Replies to:
1) yes i did, I'll fix that.... apparently I wasn't holding down the shift key
2) I was making no references, I was trying to be original and create my own thing (the Rainboa, haha get it?)
3) Clevvvver. I also prefer the american system (being an american) but I am aware a lot of people are more familiar with metrics, so I put in the simple conversion of 6 x 2.5 = 15cm