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Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2014 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Incredible, way different than what I have read so far.  Excellent work and a must read for vorephiles.

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story!

It could use a little editing for more understandable flow of events, however.

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