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Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2011 10:26 AM Title: Skittles and Bran

This was a great addition to your story. These characters, both predator and prey, are truely believeable. Wonderful job providing a background story as well as realistic descriptions of being chased and eaten. It seems like what might happen if two lovers actually attended the Forbidden Dish. I love it! I hope we may get a cameo of Skittles and maybe even Adela in future stories.

Author's Response:

thank you. I wanted it to kind of have a heart. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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