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but i'm sorry, I can't understand what Martha is doing here in the end... She was writing the whole story ?
Whatever, this bet idea was a great one, and I'd like to read the afterglow, when Meghyn wins, when Audrey knows, her reaction...
For the whole story, every chapter was enjoyable for me and I like the way you use in human nature : like butterflies burning their wings in the light of a flame, men with vore or shrinking fetishes can't help coming at forbiden dish and let them shrink... When they change their minds, it's always to late: it's good to know it when it's happening, because IT is the central event of the story ! The eating is just an enjoyable consequence. The hang on is in "who" will swallow the guy ...
I Think you and Girlfood have made a kind of classical ! No doubt it deserves the name of "tales".
Thank you very much !
In the world where the story takes place I'm having it where I only wrote my unaware stories and the stories that I've written for forbidden dish were written by martha. at the end of the story she is supposed to be watching what is happening and recording it as a story. She stole the journals as well.
I am glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it.
Date: October 29 2011 11:14 PM Title: A Good Man is Hard to Find
wow this chapter is a new personal best for u. love the way u had the waitress step in at the perfect time to distract the wife.
Thank you very much. I wanted there to be a few near misses and glimmers of hope.
Date: October 28 2011 8:33 PM Title: A Good Man is Hard to Find
i love this story. you have a creative mind that matches even girlfoods ability for ingenuity in our strange, strange realm of fiction. keep it up
Thank you very much. As long as I know people are enjoying them I will try to continue to write stories.
Date: October 05 2011 5:33 PM Title: Meanwhile...
not a big fan of willing vore but I love all of chapter 4. especially the bachorette party. great job suprising the men
Thank you. I'm not much of a fan of willing vore either. Mostly because no matter how much some of us may think we want it, in the end we would fight for our lives if it really happened.
Date: October 05 2011 10:26 AM Title: Skittles and Bran
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thank you. I wanted it to kind of have a heart. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: September 08 2011 1:40 PM Title: The Gift
I liked the chapter and I liked the twist of giving him away. If only he was a little less willing
Thank you for your comment. He was very unwilling, but considering how little thye reguarded his complaints and how he was still confused it didn't do him much good.
Date: August 30 2011 1:37 PM Title: Dine in Only
Great job Oishi1. You wrote another spellbinder. It would be interesting to know more about this mysterious girl who conveniently offered to "help" Rob and Isabella. Good attention to detail and nice setup as well.
Thanks again, and don't worry I have a companion piece I'm working on for this chapter that will give more info.
Date: July 17 2011 8:04 AM Title: Wing Man
I can honestly say I am thrilled with this story. The author was able to weave in characters from some of my Forbidden Dish tales as well as create several vore characters of his own. The story had me hooked from the beginning and I would say it was perhaps better developed than my own forbidden dish chapters. Bravo! I look forward to more.
I've gotta say I was very nervous going into it. That's messing with somebody else's art. I am very glad that you liked it. Hopefully I'll get a chance to write more. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Date: July 15 2011 6:37 AM Title: Wing Man
Quite good, this story fits well with the "canon," if you will, of the forbidden dish stories. Your dialogue is particularly good, and often goes above the standard, boring "i'm gonna eat you" blah blah blah. most people underestimate the importance of making your characters sound like real people, so kudos. i would definitely read more. i wouldn't mind seeing a couple more concrete details/description when the guys are being swallowed, but otherwise, great
I tried to stay true to the source material. Thanks for the compliment on the dialogue. Character believability is pretty important to me. It helps immerse the reader in the story. i will try to work in more sensory descriptions during the vore scenes. After all, that is the point of the story. Thanks for the review.
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I've been a girlfood fan from day 1.
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