Date: October 17 2012 11:32 PM Title: Bad Dreams
I like the part where Sam is being nursed.
Author's Response:
I am sorry that I respond now ^^; The site just doesn't notices you when you get a comment on a story.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the part :)
Date: October 11 2011 1:09 PM Title: Bad Dreams
Since its been so long I had to reread the first chapter. It's good but I did notice quite a few errors, so should proofread your work. Although I did visit your devient art profile and I take it English may not be your first language. By the way, I remember adding this story to my favourites so I hope you can update this story more often because I would like to see the relationship between the main characters develop since the context is really interesting.
Author's Response:
Yeah your right English isnt my first language ^^; and I try my best to avoid too many errors in my text. Im still happy that people read them and enjoy them so thank you fo ryou comment :)