[Report This]Date: March 09 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
Wow... BOTH her arms and BOTH her legs... Ouch.
AND she doesn't even know that her parents are dead... They'll have to break it to her.
Ive never seen something this bad happen to anyone in any other of your stories, why here? And why Ashley?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I guess I did it here because I wanted to be able to feel the really shocking finality that comes at the end of what initially feels like just a squabbling family's misunderstanding at the start of the story.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
Wow... BOTH her arms and BOTH her legs... Ouch.
AND she doesn't even know that her parents are dead... They'll have to break it to her.
Ive never seen something this bad happen to anyone in any other of your stories, why here? And why Ashley?
Date: August 10 2011 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
whoa what a cliffhanger =D
[Report This]Date: August 09 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
Wow that was an Awesome chapter, And the ending was Incredible, I have to tell you I was surprised. I thought you would break one arm or a leg. But wow both arms and both legs. I wasn't expecting that. This was by far the most intense chapter and my favorite chapter. Fantastic story telling, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you liked. on your other question about butt action, i'm thinking this story isn't going to go there, but you'll definitely see some in the 3rd blackmail story