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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 Cornered

That's so sad. Why didn't they talk to her?  There could definitely be more detail in this chapter, espcially description of her surroundings.

 

Reviewer: thestageofrage Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 Cornered

Okay this is progressing in a way I didn't expect, will she be stuck in a zoo? Used as an instrument of military mass destruction? I'm intrigued :p

Author's Response:

With what I had intended, was that in chapter 3, she'd need to wake up, so naturally, I needed her to black out in chapter 2. But this was the only way I could think of that would fit with chapter 3.

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