Ok so I'm finding the story hard to follow because of all the huge spaces between lines, could perhaps sort that out? Coud you add more description also. As someone who doesn't normally read furry stories I don't know what a humanoid cat looks like. I'm sorry for being Mr. Gruble. :/ I actually feel bad now. What I would suggesti looking at the 'writing tools' section of giantessworld. That will really help you. If not then you can send me a message I'll give you come tips. If you'd like I can e-mail you instead but I don't want to prempt your response. I hope I can be of use and maybe you could take a look a some of my stories for insperation.