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Date: November 17 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Do I sense a Shrink School game reference?

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the latest addition. Hope you continue writing.

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hell yeah!!! Super happy to see that you have decided to get back to this story. I started thinking that it was a goner for sure! I love that you're inspired by Cities in the Cellar, such a truly amazing and wonderful story. Good choice of direction, BTW.

Stay persistent! No reason in the world why you can't write nice and developed stories like the ones you are inspired by.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well, as far as they know, Goddesses outnumber Gods 2:1 so men would still be the lesser sex.

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmmm...honestly I feel kind of bad for Cara. Sure she is using an entire city to pleasure herself and what not, but she doesn't deserve being called a whore or fetishist pig. =( Especially not when she was just informing him of what her fetish apparently is. I mean honesty, she was opening up a very sensitive part of her, and the guy she wanted to share that with basically spat in her face. =(


The one I don't feel bad for is is Chavi. She is the leader of a cult that promotes sexism and keeping people as second citizens, controls the populace with lies, and doesn't even believe the order she runs. If she believed in her "religion" then it wouldn't be so bad. But no, she knows what she teaches is false. She's just manipulating the fears and hopes of the people in order to be the one in charge. I'm actually rather surprised no-one else mentioned Chavi...but it's still early.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I dont feel bad for her for what Jeff said, she just killed a whole bunch of people to satisfy her urges, he was kinda right about her! Overall liked the story up till the point its in, just saying that Cara doesnt get my pity!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

Looks like she'll have to go back to Becca to have fun. Either that or masturbate on top of it.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome! I'm really glad you chose to continue this story.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

nice work, the idea of the city being continually destroyed is pretty cool and makes it easy to include new episodes from this scenario in your future stories.  the casualness with which she decimates the place continually is excellent; it's a subtle thing, and you seem to have it here.  having said this, the lesbian theme seems arbitrarily tossed in at the end for the heck of it; i'm not against it, but it didn't seem to fit with so little explanation in the rest of the story.  still, a good job, i liked it

Author's Response: I just kinda threw it all together as I went along. There were a few parts where thought something didn't make too much sense and I agree that the sudden lesbian sex is definitely one of them but I didn't really feel like there was too much need to make it seem more natural at the time. I wanted to get straight to the action, mostly. Also, dialogue isn't really my thing most of the time, so that'll be somethin of a hinderance if I do decide to improve it. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: bizyboy00 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

More more more!  Awesome job!

Reviewer: ArtimusG Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was pleasantly surprised at how much I enjoyed this, because I usually prefer voyeur at the micro level...continue!

Author's Response: Thank you :). There's a secon story in this series in the works that'll probably be up tomorrow or later this week.

Reviewer: purple_cows Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it a lot, and I'm pretty open to anything, but I'm more into the smaller beings being fearful of the giantess/giantesses. Still, it was a great job.

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