[Report This]Date: December 21 2022 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good erotic story; would have been better with 1 more chapter with Sarah and Tom and if Sarah had fought and squirmed a bit more at the end as she was vored, IMO. In other words, it felt as if there was a bit of a rush to end the story.
[Report This]Date: June 18 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
I enjoyed this story greatly when I first read it months ago, but I neglected to review it then. I just re-read it, and it still hits the spot. The action is wonderfully juicy, one of the better insertion scenes I've read. I particularly enjoyed getting Rosa's side of the encounter.
I also admire the way Tom makes the transition from Rosa's supervisor to her pet. It's tough to find the balance between realistic character reactions and servicing a fantasy, but I was right with Tom every step of the way.
Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: April 24 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really glad you finished up the story. Though, I do wish it went on longer. This is my absolute favorite story on the site. The way you describe Rosa is just perfect. Hope to see more stories from you.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
What else can I say about this conclusion except: ROSA RULES!
Thanks for sharing this.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is one of my favorite stories on this site, great job. Hope you get the chance to finish it someday.
Date: July 16 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yes, it has. And, while part of me would be satisfied if this were the concluding chapter, another part of me wants to see what kind of poetic justice gets handed out to Sarah. ;-D
Date: July 14 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good to see you back writing again! I'm glad to know that Rosa is one hell of a female knight in glass armor.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Only just found this story with the latest addition! Don't know how I missed it before!
Anyway, thoroughly enjoying it and look forward to seeing what happens next!
[Report This]Date: July 14 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is absolutely amazing!! I don't tend to give out 10s, but this one totally deserves it.
Beyond hitting most of my buttons (and you did the anal really well, despite my not being into that as much), I should also compliment you on your writing style. The sentences flow well and demonstrate a good mastery of the language.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well, you certainly made up for lost time. I'll give you that much!
[Report This]Date: July 14 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying this quite a lot! Not a big fan of anal personally, but hey, if someone doesn't like a section they can always skip it, so keep on doing what makes you happy.
Date: July 11 2011 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Nice to see that Tom still has a chance at ending up with a more considerate giantess then Sarah. Though I hope Rosa doesn't end up shrunken as well. If Rosa does recover Tom though I wonder if she's going to have more trouble approaching him with the anal idea she was considering earlier.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, I GUARANTEE(!) you, I'm still interested.
:-D
[Report This]Date: July 10 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
With all due respect, it seems that Sarah put even _more_ into it.
;-D
[Report This]Date: June 28 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Time and chapter 7, you mean. ;-D
[Report This]Date: June 28 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hey! Don't feel squeamish about adding one more chapter if the inspiration for it has hit you. I always pre-plan 30 chapters for my stories! Sometimes, I exceed that mark. More usually, I come in under it. Take the Adam West Bat-pastiche I just finished. It took me 21 chapters to break the 10,000 word-barrier. You did it in six! And, you've garnered almost the same number of readers. Not too shabby for a new member of the club! :-)
Author's Response:
Heh thanks for all the support Cary. It has definitely been fun fleshing out new ideas of where I want to go as I start each new chapter. I don't know yet, but this may end up being much longer than I'd originally imagined. And it's given me a few ideas for possible other stories as well, which is great.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
This may not look good for Tom. He better get to Rosa before the "Intruder" spots him.
Don't feel discouraged about extending the story if you have to. There are alot of authors that feel that way about their stories. I would love to see how this plays out.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
like this nice job
[Report This]Date: June 27 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Uh-oh! Looks like Sarah was the only one who intended to benefit from Tom's loss of stature.
Great plot twist; cannot wait for the next chapter. :-)
[Report This]Date: June 13 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, as far as I'm concerned, this fourth chapter would make an even more suitable conclusion to the story. For example:
"And, he lived happily ever after in...
HER END"