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Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

are you not going to continue this stpry? :(

Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I cant wait to see more! i'd also like it if you checked out my new story too!

Reviewer: kingsun Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

I vote for more Fae, Sarah. Theo :P

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the story, though like other reviewers I find the child abuse issue uncomfortalbe and unnesesary. I hope the story does not slip towards that direction or I will just quit reading it.

On the positive side I really like your narrative and character development!

Reviewer: shrunken_luigi Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

good story. the only thing i dont like is the age of the characters too you :(
But really like your idea and writing style.

Reviewer: Candlelight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

A breath of fresh air! It feels good to read something besides the one page shrink-and-squishes. I like the multiple angles and great descriptions. Don't be afraid to push the envelope, keep it up! :)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi Sarah,

Odd story you have here, but it looks like it could be a unquie.

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