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Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

wow.  this has now officially been added to my favorites.  keep up the awesome work bud!

 

i wonder whats in store for him with shari's punishment?

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

story is getting very good. an im with hank(eventhough its sexy as hell) women dont normally grow that much, if any after high school. something has to be up.(but quite frankly i dont care what, i 'love' this story)
i just think its funny how they both work at a library/bookstore an they didnt know what the new releases were.

aaron
ps was the game 'street fighter'? with hank being 'blanka' an jodi being 'chun-li'?

Author's Response:

The game was in fact street fighter and you nailed the characters as well. I was wondering if anyone would catch that haha.

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it , great job Littlemac! I really like the slow yet not-so-slow pace, its kept my attention going all the time. Eager to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank you kindly for reviewing. I was initially concerned about the pacing, being that this is the slowest story I've written thus far. I'm happy that everyone seems to be enjoying it.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awwwww! How feet..I MEAN, "SWEET!"

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

And, this was an awesome installment.

:-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2011 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow... jodi is woderfully perfect.
love how the story is panning out too. superb job.

aaron
ps whats the 'deal' with shari? can you give a little backstory with her?

Author's Response:

Something like a backstory could come later, much later. However, because I chose to write the story in the first person it makes it more difficult to make concrete backstorys.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2011 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

great story so far.  really looking forward to how this turns out

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

YES. Please keep it up. Brillaint writing.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

what an awesome chapter. this story is really great. cannot wait to see where it goes from here.


aaron
ps jodi has pretty feet

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

One of the best situational stories that I've read.

Well done - so realistically described.

I'm looking forward to each and every chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I was striving for a more "realisitic" feel, so its nice that it's being recognized and appreciated. Thank you for the awesome review.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

All I can say is: WOW!!!!!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

If Shari gets anymore jealous, she just might _show_ Hank what's in the offi-limits section. Card-key or no card-key! And, I've a hunch whatever is back there will permanently _reduce_ his workload. The hard way!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

I think Shari is going to have third thoughts regarding whatever she had second thoughts about, in the earlier chapter. Insert ominous music, here.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

Erotically intriguing.

:-)

Author's Response:

Nice to see you're enjoying it. Thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

So far/so good. Especially, with the character development!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

As a part-time librarian, myself, I can empathize with Hank. I'm now off to chapter 2.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thank you for all your kind reviews, they really motivate me to write better (and more).

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

love how realistic this story is turning out to be, with all the 'real life' problems an what-not. well done.

aaron
ps is there going to be some foot/toe scenes?

Author's Response:

Yes, Ch. 6 has a bit, and there will be plenty more to come.

Reviewer: sundown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wish I worked there too, haha.  Great start so far, really excited to see where it goes from here.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

Here we go. Lol

Aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

Nice set up. Wish I worked there.


Aaron

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