[Report This]Date: June 11 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
very intense. an shari shows her true colors the spiteful bitch. an i cannot wai to see where you take this from here.
aaron
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I really like your writing.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome! This story just keeps getting better every chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 08 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
i hate to say it but this story just got better. lol
keep it coming.
aaron
[Report This]Date: June 08 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
Let me guess what's ahead for chapter 15. After having her way with him,. Shari will grow big enough to smuggle him back to her place(bound/gagged/naked) in her cleavage! To be her "love-slave" for the rest of his life.*
*Or, so she thinks. ;-)
[Report This]Date: June 04 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
what an incredible chapter. love the direction. but the real question is does he tell jodi that shari is on to them an the ramifications of this... i dont know but i cant wait to see what happens.
aaron
ps office gossip is the bees knees. lol.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter. I hope there is a lot more humiliation to come.
Dave
[Report This]Date: June 04 2011 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
As Barney Collier (Greg Morris) might have put it: "Hank? I knew Jim Phelps. And, you're NO Jim Phelps!"
Seriously, though: this keeps getting better and better. Two thumb's-up!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have looked at stories on this site for years. But I just registered to the site to comment on your story. I love it and the fact it reads more like some ones diary
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, it really means a lot to me!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter
Dave
[Report This]Date: June 02 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I wonder how tall they will get.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
:-O
Excuse me a minute. I need a nice COLD drink!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
awesome cliffhanger... loving the direction youre taking with this tale.
aaron
[Report This]Date: June 01 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
I really like this. You are doing a great job.
Dave
[Report This]Date: June 01 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yep! That's right, Dr. Hankenstein. She's having a monstrous growth-spurt; just like your gal-friend.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2011 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm back...as promised. And, this chapter was worth the so-called "wait." Because, let me tell you something from personal experience. Six months or more between chapters (like, say, an 11th and 12th)? THAT is a long wait!
In comparison to that, you are doing just fine.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2011 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love the fact that jodi is a little older an more experienced than him. An their sex scenes where beautifully written. Can't wait for more. I'm wondering how Shari is gonna 'punish' him though...
Aaron
Ps loved the foot massage with jodi's big sexy feet. Well done
[Report This]Date: May 31 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story so far, please continue!
[Report This]Date: May 31 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great story. I'm looking forward to more.
Dave
[Report This]Date: May 30 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
OH, yeah! I am _definitely_ tuning in for chapter 10.