Date: February 03 2018 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 15: Sisterly Subjugation
I loved it so much. I really hope you continue! Just awesome!
Date: August 05 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 15: Sisterly Subjugation
Wow wonderfull job on the story, to be honest i almost felt his pain and absoloute deterioration of hope at the end WONDERFUL!
Author's Response: hehe i'm glad, that was definitely the intent
[Report This]Date: June 09 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15: Sisterly Subjugation
what a horrible little sister! Please tell me karma come around in the next instalment and the roles get reversed.
Author's Response:
hehe we'll have to see, so far fate hasn't been too terribly kind to the main character
Date: May 26 2011 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 15: Sisterly Subjugation
Bravo!
Carly will down as one of the all time greats, the way she took control of him and didn't resort to the typical -sqush/mutilation- was amazing. You've created an icon here.
Excellent work.
Author's Response:
an ICON. wow, that's quite the group to be a member of: abraham lincoln, mickey mouse, babe ruth, and... a gigantic, sadistic 14 year old named carly. i like it! ;) thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: May 25 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15: Sisterly Subjugation
Thank you for 2 fantastic stories. I read every word of both stories. I have been reading this site for quite some time. I honestly believe that your Carly and Jack stories on this site, I am glad that you don't feel like retiring the characters yet. I too love these characters and hope their adventures continue.
This was an awesome chapter. I liked the breakdown that Jack had at the end. I think that the way his mind is now, He would still be submissive to Carly even if he was normal size again, I think she severely messed with his mind, It was a fun thing to read about. He really is just a pet brother now. Thanks again for 2 great stories and I hope there is more.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks for the support, and there absolutely will be more at some point
[Report This]Date: May 25 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 15: Sisterly Subjugation
I'm really glad that you were able to conclude this great story! The ending was great and I believe Carly's brother is suitably broken at this point. I honestly thought she was going to crush him at the end, but leaving him alive does allow for future installments of sibling degredation! Thanks again and for accepting my apology earlier. I'm certainly in no position to dictate what someone shouldor shouldn't write about. Also, if you were to have Carly off her brother, what was your idea to have her do? Did the lost section contain a different ending?
Author's Response:
i did think briefly of killing him and it would have been by vore, to sort of mirror the fake-out ending of the first one, although the "lost" ending didn't actually involve this. however, i have some other, unused ideas that i felt could comprise another (and probably final) installment, so i decided to hold off. additionally, i just didnt' feel like it made sense in the context of the rest of the story. carly never really wanted to kill her brother, just break him down into a bug, basically, and that was the intent from the start. at some point, though, as i do enjoy exploring other options, i may write a much darker story with more of that kind of thing, we'll have to see