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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 14: Washed Up

Wow that was a fun chapter. For awhile there I thought Jack would be stuck with Jenny, I was kinda hoping for that. LOL. I will be sad when this story ends. It's Fantastic.

Dave

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14: Washed Up

i kinda wish that jenny would have found him and kept him without carly's knowledge, but this was good too. 

 

this story is truly awesome, my friend.  cant wait til you write part 3. 



Author's Response:

that thought did cross my mind, but i also realized i had been sort of drawing it to a conclusion for a few chapters, and it might have felt artificial to tack on a "jenny" section, which i'm sure could have filled up several chapters alone.  however, i wouldnt rule out things like that in part 3.  it's going to be the last of these characters, so i intend to play every card this "series" has left. 

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