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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sole Survivor

Another fantastic chapter. Thank you for writing them so quickly. Im always looking forward to a new chapter.

Dave

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sole Survivor

Hey, great story, really like how she dominates him, especially with her feet. Hope you write more.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sole Survivor

I love the foot torture depictions. I also think the end of the story, if not the brother's life, is near and at hand.  I could obviously be mistaken, but feel that even Carly is beginning to realize that there's not much more she can do to destroy her brother's humanity.  That said, he seems to be thinking the opposte, that Carly plans only to keep him around as her house-broken, tiny brother-pet.  That may be what she's thinking but I guess I'm hoping for the "dark side" to win out, and to do so in the most humilating, painful, and soul-massacering fashion as possible!  Thanks again and keep pounding chapters out like a champ!



Author's Response:

indeed, the story is drawing to a close.  i have it all typed out, but i thought since this is the end, i'd make the effort to actually read over my stuff this time before posting it.  it's not that i'm lazy, i'm just so gut-bustingly busy right now these things would never get out if i editted each and every one.  they'll be up soon; thanks for reading.

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