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Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Amazing Human Chewing Gum

just when i thought the story couldnt get any better, you managed to do it. 



Author's Response:

a blatant defiance of the laws of quality! haha, i'm just kidding; thanks for your consistent reviews

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Amazing Human Chewing Gum

Wow that was great, I just love how helpless Jack is in this chapter. Just when I think there isn't anything left to do to this guy. You come up with something awesome like this. Great job.

Dave



Author's Response:

jack may be my personal "fictional character i might consider wanting to die before being"

 

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