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Reviewer: tjnova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 10: Tongue Twister

nice

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tongue Twister

I love how jack is humiliated but feels good in Carly's mouth. It must really be messing with his mind. This was a great chapter.

Dave



Author's Response:

hehe, thanks.  my basic, unspoken goal of each chapter seems to be, "how can i screw with jack's mind even more this time?"

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