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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7: Carly's Mouth Kitchen

This was an amazing chapter. You are becoming my favorite write on this site. The way you have Carly taking care of Jack but at the same time torturing and humiliating him is fantastic. I hope there ls a lot more to come.

Dave



Author's Response:

i'm flying by the seat of my pants here; as long as i can sit here and think "hmmm... this would work," then there will be more ;)

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