Date: February 01 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast
Wow I really lile the detail. I hope there is more soon!
Author's Response:
Well, there's about 5 other stories with these characters, so you're covered
Date: September 13 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast
The suspense is killing me !
Author's Response:
Luckily you don't have to wait in suspense long since this thing has about 80 sequels now, haha
[Report This]Date: July 07 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast
This is an excellent story. I really liked how it was very descriptive but it wasn't "purple prose" either. I really liked the characters as well, and I was rooting for Jack and was happy he was protesting against his sister. I haven't read any of your other stories yet, but I've heard a lot of praise and I'm going through them, and this one is great.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. I always appreciate hearing from people on my older stories. Hope you like the others that you read.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast
I did read the whole thing and I loved every chapter. I'm glad you left it open ended. This is one of the best stories on here. I would love a sequel.
Dave
Author's Response:
hey, cool, there's 3; ive been thinking about it and im honestly really starting to think "yes" on the sequel at some point
[Report This]Date: May 15 2011 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast
Very well written. I really enjoyed it. To be honest, I skipped over a lot of the exposition and jumped straight to the action, but what I read was extremely well written. Fantastic job.
Author's Response:
hey, it's the beauty of having chapter skips; you can have the story or just go for the meat
[Report This]Date: May 14 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast
one of the best stories i've read in a while. i would definately read a sequel if you wrote one. you have some great writing talent.
Author's Response:
hey, cool, someone actually read that end note! i wasn't sure whether people actually bothered with those. well, i'm glad you liked it, there's one vote at least
Date: May 14 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast
The power and arrogance she had and displayed was simply...amazing. One of the greatest antogonists of any story i've ever read.
Author's Response:
thanks. evil characters are such a treat to write