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Reviewer: The Demon Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

i started reading,saw my name as the main character and liked it.kept reading,liking the build up,and enjoyed it.this is good.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Roeladin Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

This is a GREAT story! Absolutely fabulous. It makes you wonder when those scientists come off their lazy assess  and invent a much needed shrinking potion.Oh God.... A dream come true.

I hope we will see  more of your work.

Kind regards.

 

 

Author's Response:

thanks for the review, I appreciate it. glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Katz Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

ok, i freaking love your work! i have read ... most of your stories and i simply ADORE the way you write!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad to know people are still enjoying this story over a year after it was posted. I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

You did a fabulous job, especially or your first story.  These suckers can drain an author, and I commend your tenacity in seeing it through to a conclusion.  My two cents, for what it's worth, is that I would have liked to have seen the brother meet his demise at his sister's feet. Sure, he could have held out, but still being slowly scrunched to death or something (says my one-track mind)!  However, I liked the way you left it open-ended, as well.  As some here realize, I'm a pretty predictible author in terms of being foot-focused and in having the main character end up ruined at woman's feet, so don't mind me!  I'd love to see new stuff sometime from you!

Author's Response:

I did wonder if wouldn't like the ending; i really just did that because i feared the foot stuff would start to get stale if i didn't mix it up, and as im really kind of a varied person, i like vore probably as much as feet, i tried to spread the love.  hopefully you enjoyed the heavy amount foot stuff in there, though, as its almost all foot before chapter 10, i now realize.  thanks for the mass of five-stars you gave me in reviews, its much appreciated

Reviewer: blackguyj2009 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

Its just my opinion that stories written like this are not fun to read at all. It feels like someone is talking in my ear too closely. You know that feeling where someone is putting their mouth right by your ear.

 

Second person stories have never been fun to read for me at least.

Author's Response:

i'm sorry that the perspective hurt your view of the story.  to me, i just enjoy doing it in 2nd person because it's easier for me to put myself in the story than when it's just talking about a random guy whom I can't relate to at all.  i definitely plan to experiment with other perspectives in the future though

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

You're doing a great job in setting this story up.  The pacing and characterization is spot-on.  As a foot guy, I particularly like the way the sister is slowly exerting a dominant nature on her older brother.  Also, you did a good job of giving us a hint of how strong her feet are, particularlyt the pugent smell.  I see this as foreshadowing how destructive her feet will be on her brother when he's really tiny! I hope she breaks and destroyes him! Keep up the excellent work!

Reviewer: Gheed Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

This is shaping up to be a great story.

Author's Response:

thanks!  i'm pretty new to this stuff, but i'll do my best to make the rest of it an enjoyable tale