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Reviewer: mad dog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2017 10:11 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

is it alread written if so were is it 

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Date: December 21 2017 3:15 PM Title: Life changes in an instant

I liked so far when will you write music 

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Date: October 11 2017 4:31 PM Title: Life changes in an instant

LOVE THE THYME I HOPE LITTLE SISTER HAS HIM LICK AND SUCK A LOT MORE AND MOTHER PLAY WITH HIM ALSO

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Date: October 09 2017 1:43 AM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

it has been at least a year' did you stop writing,I would give it a rating but honestly to be fair don't get me wrong your writing is really good but like the person who's writing the story succubus sumoning ,well it was 2016 its almost 2018 please don't  do like him talk about  a big let down 

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Date: October 08 2017 4:14 AM Title: Life changes in an instant

I wish the 8 year old Giantess girl made the tiny boy a sex slave

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Date: August 28 2017 2:06 PM Title: Life changes in an instant

it wasn't no were finished because it just started as it is it's so,so

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Date: August 09 2017 5:06 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

when will you write some more,it's good so far 

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Date: August 06 2017 5:18 PM Title: Life changes in an instant

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Date: May 23 2017 7:53 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

it would be a good story but it starts off and ended.. it's a old story are you going to write any more there is not a nuff to rate so I will wait for more

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Reviewer: Perkjeff905 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 8:29 AM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

When will the second part be available

Reviewer: Noodlefanboy25 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2014 6:50 PM Title: Life changes in an instant

Please finish this story

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Date: March 28 2014 10:40 AM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

No regrow not cool forget what I said earlier

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Date: March 28 2014 10:32 AM Title: Background information on the family. Mark get's a BJ, Well sort of.

Really powers wow not a potion?

Reviewer: Uhpoop Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 10:24 AM Title: Life changes in an instant

Switch Brittany with Rachel and me with mark

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Date: January 17 2013 7:19 PM Title: Life changes in an instant

This was the beast story when's the next part coming out hope it's soon

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Date: September 26 2012 8:23 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

Love the story, are you going to finish it?

Reviewer: Nallus Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 5:25 PM Title: Life changes in an instant

Great story (start)!
I know how school / job changes can interrupt the flow, I've changed jobs too many times lately and getting back to my two hundreds-of-pages stories can seem overwhelming, but I put time in even in small pieces 'til I finish a chapter.
PLEASE fulfill our needs!
Thanks

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Date: May 30 2012 12:13 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

Good but why is Rachel keeping him as a pet?

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Date: May 18 2012 3:08 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

just 2 questions are u going to bring us to the present? and will thiss start a war between britany and rachel?

 

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