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Reviewer: Lumostr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 24 2024 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

This story was very well written and paid, and there was a good balance between the parts...thank you

Reviewer: SmolCrowing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2022 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

I loved this so much

Reviewer: quicksilver6 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2018 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

I'm glad to see that someone else enjoys "gentle domination". and it was executed very well, I'm not much of a foot guy, but the tone made it really enjoyable.

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

I liked the story alot I give it two thumds up

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 16

This was literally so riveting, I tore straight through all 16 chapters! Which, in my book, makes this an exceptionally good story. Worth SIX gold stars, if that were possible. :-)

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

I first read this story months ago, and I came back to read it again and add it to my favorites, and now I'm reading it again.  I love the relationship and the dialogue, but the action is the best.  I have both of them perfectly in mind.  Thanks for all the faps.

Reviewer: dzaza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great story! Want to see the second part!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

 

wow another good story. Im mad i just found you so late

Reviewer: tjnova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

I couldn't give it more praise, except i would of liked to seen them with a lot more mouth action, perhaps her enjoying his flavor and a lot more tung action from her as well..

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 22 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well done!

I really enjoyed reading about the consumation of their "marriage".

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hey! That would make a great alias for them, if they ever went to a motel for a weekend vacation: Joe and Diane Tucker.

Seriously, though; this was a great story, in general And, this particular chapter was suitably...climactic.


:-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

lol great ending. i dont whant it to end...

aaron

ps do you have any future stories planned?

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