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Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

The dialogue you use between these characters is really well done for an erotica because you get both Diane's teasing during the erotic parts as well as serious discussion concerning their relationship, especially in later chapters. I would encourage you to write more fiction with these qualities or even a sequel to this story because it is very endearing.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2011 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 10

An interesting title for a sequel.

"DIANE; GODDESS OF COUGARS."

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

hell i wouldnt wanna go back either...
but is gonna be given an ie of what her 'punishment' might entail...

aaron
ps awesome job, i really am feeling like this story plot hasnt been do before(i could be wrong though), at any rate its remarkable

Author's Response:

Thank you greatly for all your positive responses.

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