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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

awesome ending. short an sweet. love her character, shes so life like its unreal. great job. cant wait to see where the next chapter takes us...

and hes getting smaller... thats fantastic.

aaron

Author's Response:

I often wonder how realistically I'm portraying the character's personalities. Thank you for the feedback.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

Only if he goes below, say, 3-6 inches. Otherwise, I think it safe to assume that he'll survive to receive a lot more mothering in chapter eight.

:-)

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