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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

holy shit... great twist.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

As Mr. Rogers might put it:

"Can you say, 'love slave?' I knew you couldn't. Mr. Rogers was just messing with your head."

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

Don't want to sound like a critic, but chapter 4 and 5 seem rather identical to me? =D



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Whoops! Got it fixed, thanks for letting me know!

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