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Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 3:24 AM Title: Just Dropping By

I been showing my support on this story from the very start and have been enjoying it also. The only thing that i didn't care for too much is the evolution from giant to titan. I like the size of a titan but it was all the powers that came with it that i didn't like so much.

I think making the giants grow and keeping the one special power they had would be enough. A line that comes to mind when i think of a titan is "Nothing unique they all look the same" i know they all don't look the same but it's more to their powers. I also find being perfect is boring in some way, nothing can be perfect.

So the idea of Sven finding a way to strip the titans of their extraordinary powers is a good idea but i don't think the powers should be all strip away, maybe he can find a way to keep the power they had before they became titans so they are just a bigger version of a giant.

I see it being made into a powder and having airplanes or  having a unique giant/titan that evolve wings spread it around the planet that way it can be carried by the winds that keeps giants from getting more powers than the ones they have as a giant. They will still grow to titan size but just with out all the powers.

 

I can't believe the story is up to 60 chapters now. You have been doing a very good job on it. I find it fun to know that a female is wrighting the story. Only because i don't know if am reading other stories on here that is being writen by females.

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 11:33 PM Title: Just Dropping By

      Another great chapter, but I don't think you should strip the Titens of their powers. To me it would just take away from the story. I mean it is the evolution of humans and don't forget that animals are evolving too. So say they came up against a predator that was evolved and with some or all of those powers that the titens have, that was trying to kill them, they wouldn't have much of a chance to defend themselfs if those powers were striped from them.


 


I hope you update soon! ^_^

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