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Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 4:54 AM Title: The Heat Is On

That was a very cute scene with Jane and Sven as they had their time together. Its cute to see a small female with a giant male instead of the other way around.

Thats cool that Cody is superfast

Am looking forward to seeing what happens next with Cody and the six thugs.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words, Angel!!!!  I wanted to make Cody super fast because of all the running away from the bullies.  I had a lot of fun writing the dialog between Sven and Jane.  How could Sven pleasure her with being over thirty feet tall?  Coming up with cute little names for the foreplay was fun too.  Have you read my new story I just posted?  I think trying the fairytale thing would be a little fun too.  I glad you're still hanging in there!  Thanks again!!!

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