Date: April 24 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
As of chapter 7, this story has exactly the same number of words as my longest story, albeit with one less chapter which I thought was quite odd.
I'm hoping for a happy ending, as always.
Date: April 24 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like that peasants are flocking to Valerie -- the start of her own little (er, no pun intended) kingdom. Would have been awesome if they'd set up their village inside the giant castle itself, like a miniature toyland. But I guess that might be a bit hazardous.
The soldiers using a cart to haul away a coin that she pulled from her pocket with one hand is quite an image.
Author's Response:
Yup, that would have been hazardous, and they wouldn't be able to see the sun then, lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
superb chapter. im just glad that the 'poisoned' arrows didnt have the desired effect on valerie.(cause i was all like here we go again, lol)
cant wait for the next chapter.
aaron