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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

The king will have Alban for treason no doubt. Hopefully I won't have to wait too long to find out.



Author's Response:

Well, I'm still writing, but it's going rather slow at the moment. But I'll have the next (and last) chapter posted later this week, promise!

Reviewer: Cooper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Kool

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter. glad to see this story back so soon. wouldve liked to have seen something humiliating happen to the king though, lol. the build up to the next chapter is finaminal. cant wait to read it.

aaron
ps damn cant beleive that val didnt even complain about the sword slashes on her pretty feet... an cant beleive one didnt get stuck in..

Author's Response:

Oh, she certainly complained, lol. I just didn't write all of her dialogue (can't make the chapters too long.)

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