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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well this is rather sudden. But I guess after being saved things would take a better turn. Hopefully it won't be too long for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Well, I didn't want to spend forever writing this story, so things might happen rather suddenly here and there! Don't know when the next chapter will be finished, though I hope I get it done soon enough.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

love the way she saved him... an love his reaction. these characters are so realistic... an the ending was superb.

wonder how his kingdom will handle val?

aaron

Author's Response:

You'll find out, hopefully, in the next few chapters. Thanks for the review!

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